Journal 46: Your Argument

     According to my argument last time, I think that I provide more logical appeals of my subject. I list some similarities and differences of both ipnone 4s and HTC Incredible S. For example, I compare their sizes of screen, their weights, the sizes of the phone, shortage, and camera. As I providing many details of these two types of phones, it would make audience easier to compare both of them and think which one is suited for them. Those details are logical appeals which are easily to convince people. On the other hand, I also have a emotional appeal, but it doesn’t weight as much as logical appeals. I mention that most of people around me, especially my friends, are using smart phones. Although smart phone is not necessary for me, I just want it in order to have a convenient life after I study abroad along. In addition, my friends who are already in the United States tell me that it is better to have a smart than a normal phone because at least you can use Internet. That is why I pick these two phone and want to buy one of them. To this argument, I provide more logical appeals because those data and information about the smart phones seem to have stronger feeling to persuade people.